A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves. Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her Explain how to apply for the job
Hi robert,
Hope you are doing good, I am writing here to let you know about a job opening in my company as you wrote me in your last letter that you are actively looking for a job in Delhi NCR. The job description is quite matching to skills that are mentioned in your CV, The positoin is for one of the project that is in pipeline and hiring for several designations are going on for that.
I have refered your resume for Business Analyst position, the role and responsibility for that post is comprises with several tasks like collecting business requirements from client and transform them in to functional diagram and write technical specification and pass them to relevant department managers.
As you have done your masters in business and administration and you hold a certificate in Business requirement analysis and design, Thus I found you suitable candidate for this position; along it this certificate is also mentioned in desirable skill to have in job posting of company.
I have referred your name alraedy on company internal job portal and the only thing that is left is, email your latest CV and a copy of certificate to project manager. I am giving you referal number and managers email adress here. don't forget to mention referal number it is quite vital.
Hope you will also like the Job and I wish you all the best for your interview.
Your Mate
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Dont
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, thus, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1139.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72614107884 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69119047174 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551867219917 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.3248583919 44.8134815571 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.555555556 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7777777778 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.437109215265 0.216113520407 202% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182819919252 0.0766984524023 238% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121822055765 0.0603063233224 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25490351624 0.12726935374 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114821273424 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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