A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for his/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear Joe,
I hope you're good. I'm writing with respect to the letter of yours that I received a month ago and you asked me about the job opportunities in my country. Yes! I find a job in your field of study i.e., engineering.
There are one or two job vacancies which are suitable for you i.e., networking. The name of Companies is 'The Shaw' and ' The valley Networks' The main objects for both Companies are almost the same. Under this, your job is to create networking panels for the client companies and assisting them from time to time.
I think this job is perfect for you. Since we both completed our masters from America in the field of networking. The best part of this job is that you may give services as a freelance.
For applying to these jobs, just go to their websites and fill up the application form. The application form will require certain credentials and you have to upload the same. After that, you will get a revert on your E-mail from the company within a week.
I hope you will get a job. I look forward to hearing from you good news.
Your friend,
Sam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Joe, I hope youre good. Im writing with respect to the le...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Joe, I hope youre good. Im writing with respect to the letter of y...
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Line 9, column 118, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g. The name of Companies is The Shaw and The valley Networks The main objects for...
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Line 13, column 38, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... I think this job is perfect for you. Since we both completed our masters from Amer...
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Line 17, column 201, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...load the same. After that, you will get a revert on your E-mail from the company within ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, may, i think, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 917.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.585 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39397159549 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3922146615 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.1333333333 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.475167115999 0.216113520407 220% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163332675422 0.0766984524023 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086727634181 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245378460484 0.12726935374 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057614258773 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.