A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country.
You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear John,
Hello! I'm at pink of my health and hope you're sailing at the same boat. Indeed, I've been quite delightful
since I received your invitation to visit Canada. Somehow it would be my first initial overseas trip , so I'm overwhelmingly
curious to undergo international exposure. Thus, I insist you to acquaint me with the individual taste of your family members
as i aspire to present some spellbind gifts to them.
Moreover, the bar of my excitement has surged briskly, so draft as soon as possible and apprise me with the planned activities
which would be performed. Undoubtedly, the winter is at the doors at your native place, therefore kindly advice me about
the type of attires to be carried.
Ahh! how can you forget that I am a foodie soul ? Hence, I am fond of tasting gourmet foods,
so inform me about the popular dishes of your home town. I hope i could really enjoy some delicious cuisines over there.
I'm anticipating a prompt reply from your side.
Your lovely,
Navdeep Puri.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear John, Hello! Im at pink of my health and hope youre sai...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...Hello! Im at pink of my health and hope youre sailing at the same boat. Indeed, Ive b...
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Line 3, column 81, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...youre sailing at the same boat. Indeed, Ive been quite delightful since I received...
^^^
Line 4, column 58, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your invitation to visit Canada. Somehow it would be my first initial overseas t...
^^
Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... invitation to visit Canada. Somehow it would be my first initial overseas trip ...
^^
Line 4, column 103, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... would be my first initial overseas trip , so Im overwhelmingly curious to under...
^^
Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... be my first initial overseas trip , so Im overwhelmingly curious to undergo int...
^^
Line 5, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...int me with the individual taste of your family members as i aspire to present s...
^^
Line 6, column 4, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...idual taste of your family members as i aspire to present some spellbind gifts ...
^
Line 8, column 127, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d apprise me with the planned activities which would be performed. Undoubtedly, t...
^^^
Line 9, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... place, therefore kindly advice me about the type of attires to be carried. Ah...
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Line 12, column 6, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: How
... type of attires to be carried. Ahh! how can you forget that I am a foodie soul ...
^^^
Line 12, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce, I am fond of tasting gourmet foods, so inform me about the popular dishes of...
^^^
Line 13, column 65, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...opular dishes of your home town. I hope i could really enjoy some delicious cuisi...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...oy some delicious cuisines over there. Im anticipating a prompt reply from your s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 847.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86781609195 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63390730986 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.706896551724 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7475504729 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8181818182 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152272952632 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581533922611 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045715752154 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528240863606 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349547831904 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.