Some people think the best way to stay fit is joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both the views with your opinion.
There is an old proverb which says"Health is Wealth".It is true indeed.The most important thing now a days for an individual is to stay fit and healthy.The more fit a person is, occurence of any diseases will be less.Though the mode of exercise might be different.Some prefer going to visit a gym/health club while others think walking,cycling or climbing stairs is sufficient.Here, we will discuss both the views.
Now a days,people have become more health conscious which is a good thing.After joining a gym,it becomes our responsibility to attend it on a regular basis because of an advance payment made.Modern gym/health clubs are equipped with latest technology instruments and they give systematic schedule to follow.Also,gym has trainers who guide an individual as per their needs and body types.This helps a lot in maintaining health.Moreover,health club membership is good for those who do not have a chance for any other entertainment or sports facilities in big cities.
Moving towards a second argument of this debate,physical activities like walking and climbing stairs plays an important role as well.Some people prefer to go office by walking if office is within 3 to 4 km of their vicinity.People who want to stay healthy by conducting a necessary amount of daily activities do not need to spend an extra time for gym.Walking is a great exercise which can prevent mainly diabetes and cardiovascular diseases.
Climbing stairs can be considered as a part of an intense activity and helps in reducing calories. At the end,I would like to say that whichever way a person selects to stay fit,regular physical activity helps in reducing the risk of serious life threatening diseases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, so, well, while, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24087591241 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.51312587106 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63503649635 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 20.2975951904 266% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 176.317440998 49.4020404114 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 287.2 106.682146367 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.8 20.7667163134 264% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281104231263 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134113715373 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414067620556 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152779743627 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282818329538 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 16.67 50.2224549098 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.4 11.3001002004 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.0 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.58 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.1190380762 233% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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