A friend you met last year has invited you to visit his home country you have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
Request advise about a gift for his or her family member.
Ask about activities and clothing in his country.
Find out about the food.
Dear Tosin,
I hope you are doing fine, I was happy when I received the invite to visit your country. I have had many though run through my mind and I also read a lot about Ghana since then. I have never been to Ghana before, so I have a lot of question for you.
I intend coming on the 5th of December, I would like to get some native Nigeria items for your family members. In Nigeria, there are a lot of fine African fabrics l and unique art works, do you think your siblings will like any of the art work, I am considering get a few African cloths for your parents. Let me know if this will be fine.
As soon as I got your message, I read about the weather in Ghana, it seems it would be cold, I have lived in Jos which is also cold, however I have never liked in anywhere as cold as Ghana. What are the outfits you would suggest I bring along, I do not want to be the odd one out.
I like food adventure, as you know already, so I look forward to trying all the meals. I’ll love to have an idea of the variety of dishes available in your country. I would have to try it all, once I arrive.
Reply my message as soon as possible, I am super excited about the journey already.
See you soon.
Oluwatofarati
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... doing fine, I was happy when I received the invite to visit your country. I have...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...also read a lot about Ghana since then. I have never been to Ghana before, so I h...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... so I have a lot of question for you. I intend coming on the 5th of December, I...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... am considering get a few African cloths for your parents. Let me know if this wi...
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Line 19, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...already. See you soon. Oluwatofarati
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 994.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.09053497942 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17707530764 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584362139918 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4951810929 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.4615384615 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6923076923 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241712036282 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090444986131 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636019624115 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118140261845 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661127755059 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.