Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live?
Give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.
Food preparation is a big task, especially when we have little time to cook. However, these days it is easy to make our eatable with the help of ready to eat products. The processed food manufactured by food industries are prepared food or easy to cook. This trend has impacted our daily life in many ways, which will be discuss in the following paragraphs.
Firstly, use of manufactured food from industries is the time saving step in this modern world and it benefits various youth individuals who live out of home in metro cities for job purposes. Majority of the items are coming in the market in prepared form thus people have to add the mixture and cook, thus saving a kitchen time from raw products preparation. It helps an individual to utilize the same time in other activities. In addition to that, people who are not aware of food preparation can also make their own food with the guidance of company packed foods.
Secondly, the excess eating of eating these prepared food can leads to various side effects to our health. Eating these products lacks vital nutrients which makes the body sensitive to infections, thus increase the life hurdles. In addition to that, these products carry preservatives like mono sodium glutamate, which also can have adverse effects on individual’s brain system. From the survey by nutritional department around 70 percent of youth individuals are sensitive to infections because of routine habit of eating pre-cooked foods.
In conclusion, it is irrefutable that, food preparation is not a difficult task today with the help of food industries as they provide readymade products for cooking preparation. Although, the adverse impact on health care should not neglected by the authorities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'products'' or 'product's'?
Suggestion: products'; product's
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Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ating of eating these prepared food can leads to various side effects to our health. ...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ymade products for cooking preparation. Although, the adverse impact on health care shou...
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Line 4, column 235, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'neglect'
Suggestion: neglect
...dverse impact on health care should not neglected by the authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07317073171 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81386013945 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7913563581 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35714285714 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100550886752 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0363742750169 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423129244189 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0666957896373 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393995562383 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.