Some students take a year off between school and university, to work or to travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Concept of year gap is quite popular in the western education system, where some students prefer to take a year off before taking admission to university level after school education finished. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of the above-mentioned notion in the following paragraphs.
Having a year off in between high school education and higher studies education at university level is advantageous for the learner in many ways. Firstly, it provides an opportunity to explore their educational knowledge with the market and to know the practical values of their studies. Students can learn about the needs in the professional world and implement these things in their studies. For instance, science students after finishing school education will learn about the different aspects of microbiology subject to know which aspect is better according to his needs.
Secondly, people start earning during the gap year and make themselves financially strong to support their future studies and other needs. The gap year provides autonomy to a student to do professional tasks and learn skills. However, some students discontinue their studies because they find difficult to go back and start studying again. Their perception of education changes as they start having a regular income. Therefore, these individuals need guidance to understand the difference in earning after school education and after finishing university studies.
In conclusion, although there are some limitations with the gap year in education, the learning and understanding the job market are way more beneficial for any student with regards to their future opportunities. Hence, I believe that advantageous of the idea outweighs the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57735849057 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93191762767 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554716981132 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0399922306 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.692307692 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3846153846 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226980694243 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789066200208 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067826148296 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146417088 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0482906042827 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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