A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it.
Describe some other presents that you received.
Explain some of the things you did on your birthday.
Dear Sarah,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. Sorry, it's taken me so long to write to you about this wonderful present.
To be honest, I was surprised by receiving your gift on my special day, as it felt like you just picked my thoughts and gifted me a wireless Bluetooth AirPods, which I was planning to purchase, as my new phone doesn't support an audio jack. I'm so happy with the quality of sound and the comfort of this AirPods.
What happened is that, I have received too many birthday gifts from many of my relatives and friends too. As this was my last birthday in India. They all were anxious to give me surprises and I have received many gifts like shoes, sweatshirts, jackets, protein shakers and many more.
I wasn't aware of my birthday party, as soon as I reached home all the guests surprised me with their wishes. We had a cake cutting ceremony and dinner post that, and had dance too. I would have been happier if you could have joined us.
Hoping to see you at my place in summer vacation.
Yours Faithfully,
Hardik
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- A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present Write a letter to your friend In your letter Thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it Describe some other presents that you received Explain some of the things you did on yo 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 211, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...s planning to purchase, as my new phone doesnt support an audio jack. Im so happy with...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...new phone doesnt support an audio jack. Im so happy with the quality of sound and ...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...m many of my relatives and friends too. As this was my last birthday in India. The...
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Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ts, protein shakers and many more. I wasnt aware of my birthday party, as soon as ...
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Line 9, column 171, Rule ID: HAD_VBP[1]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'danced'.
Suggestion: danced
... ceremony and dinner post that, and had dance too. I would have been happier if you c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52284263959 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29643682647 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654822335025 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7643943533 44.8134815571 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.25 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4166666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 4.34317383033 12% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190418374643 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697379567821 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539893441051 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102748821492 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587333495152 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.