A friend of yours is thinking of going on a campaign holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter explain-
1. explain why you think your friend would enjoy a campaign holiday
2. describe some possible disadvantages
3. say whether you would like to go camping with your friends this summer
Dear Mahima,
I know its the time of the year again for your family trip and this time you have decided to go for a camping holiday.
I must say that you are going to have the best time of your life which you will cherish life long. As a matter of fact, camping is extremely adventurous and you will enjoy every bit of it. To begin with, camping offers you the chance to enjoy the cold weather in this hot summer as it is usually away form the city. Not only weather, but also it embodies treking which is again enticing as you all have to walk together to reach the camp location. Late night music, unlimited drinks and exciting games will be a cherry on the cake.
However, a great deal of fun comes along with little disadvantages. As I know that you are a luxury conscious person, you can find it difficult to sleep as the mattress they provide are little less comfortable. Additionally, washrooms are also not that huge in comparison to a high-graded hotel.
I would also like to come with you to make this trip memorable, however, I have my annual exams coming next month and I have to prepare for them. Nevertheless, I would try to make a plan and come.
Hope you have the best time of the year. Enjoy and don't forget to share your photographs.
Thanks
Sanya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 8, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
Dear Mahima, I know its the time of the year again for your fam...
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Line 10, column 52, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ve the best time of the year. Enjoy and dont forget to share your photographs. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, as a matter of fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41772151899 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38602278646 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573839662447 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4719605633 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.5384615385 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2307692308 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 4.34317383033 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189126924267 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0623916644622 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759765219161 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126772404383 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898138894485 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.