The two graphs give data about how many million foreign visitors came to particular countries by month in the year 2010 and by year during the period of 60 years, starting from 1950 and which areas they visited around the globe.
Overall, it is clear that summer months, namely July and August, had the highest number of international tourists. In addition, there was a notable upward trend in the amount of visitors in all the regions, in which Europe took the leading position.
It can be seen that for the inbound tourism by months of 2010, in January the countries welcomed nearly 60 million arrivals from foreigners, after which this figure continued rising significantly until it reached the peak at around 145 million in July. However, from August to the end of the year, the total arrivals plunged dramatically to approximately 45 million higher than its initial value in January and settled to 70 million in December.
In terms of international tourist arrivals by region, in 1950 the number of visitors to 5 recorded areas was quite the same at about 30 million. Europe showed the greatest amount of tourist flew to, rising to just under half of a billion in 2010. The amount of people visiting Asia witnessed a significant growth from 20 million in 1980 to 200 million in 2010, whereas the increase in international arrivals to the Americas was steadier, it had a 50 million rise between 1980 and 2010. Additionally, the Middle East and Africa had also grown over the period, peaking at around 30 million in 2010.
- The graphs below show the number of international tourists by month and by year and which regions of the world they visit Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 84
- The bar chart shows the average price of a house in the UK in different years The pie chart shows the percentage between owners people renting and those with second homes 84
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 26.3917525773 216% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85496183206 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59804537161 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4041851175 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 16.8248392259 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127168843994 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573457504032 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450051279538 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847066833788 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412568768535 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 26.3917525773 216% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1272.0 937.175257732 136% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85496183206 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59804537161 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568702290076 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 290.88556701 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4041851175 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.333333333 76.5299724578 185% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 16.8248392259 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127168843994 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573457504032 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450051279538 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847066833788 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412568768535 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 7.45979381443 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.