You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

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You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board.

Dear Mr. Walker,

I am writing this letter to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager which was advertised on our university notice board. I am a last year student of Loren Brusque University, pursuing master’s in business administration. I have completed bachelor’s degree in Quality Assurance with distinction score and got job offer during the last semester.

I have three years of extensive experience in Software Testing, worked on manual and automation domain in various onshore projects. Due to this worked with experienced Quality Assurance Manager’s in multiple development applications and learned key skills to test the application under test. Also, to get exposure in people management and cost estimation now studying in business administration. Since this job role required candidate to be experienced in preparing test plan, weekly reports, daily status progress documentation, managing the team, assigning the work to team members and delivering the results to client which I have excelled in these areas based on my degree and experience.

I am applying for this role because of work requirements matches my profile and I would be the right candidate to fit into the role.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours Faithfully,

Sreenivas

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ster's in business administration. I have completed bachelor's degree i...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...t job offer during the last semester. I have three years of extensive experienc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56060606061 4.54256449028 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18675662932 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661616161616 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.2550136227 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 76.5299724578 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257956753209 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977123067987 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669469943999 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140995565414 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901076265275 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 70.7449484536 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 7.45979381443 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 7.59969072165 130% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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