Dear Jamie,
I am delighted to hear that you are visiting my country in a couple of months. I still remember our meeting in Tokyo last year. You had then helped me out of a difficult situation even though we hadn’t met before. Since then we haven’t had an opportunity to meet each other.
I am glad that I am finally getting an opportunity to return the favour. While you are in India, you can stay with my family. We have a spacious home in Bangalore. We have also got a spare bedroom for guests. Staying in a hotel in Bangalore is rather expensive. That is not necessary either because my home is only a few kilometers away from the hall where you will be attending the conference. During your stay in Bangalore, we can visit important landmarks in the city. Also, if time permits we can visit Mysore which has some amazing palaces and temples. You will also be able to enjoy South Indian foods during this trip. Please let me know if you have any other plans.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards,
Amar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ation even though we hadn’t met before. Since then we haven’t had an opportunity to m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49206349206 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4050631065 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.7721870605 44.8134815571 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.0625 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8125 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9375 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215947503972 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650512707907 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568213969441 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134210556012 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498778987798 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.87 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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