In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, youngsters have lack of interests in watching news on TV or reading newspapers which is a burning issue. It has increased at an alarming rate. This essay will discuss the prime causes and it's solutions in a detailed manner.
Apparently, modernization and westernization is to be blamed for this universal phenomenon. In this technological world, juveniles are using different mediums to gather their information unlike watching news on television or reading newspapers. The other sources of platforms are mobile devices, internet, and social media websites that children are gaining the knowledge these days. This is because the internet is the only gate for an utmost unlimited amount of new information where people could get access in a more convenient and quicker way rather than using old sources like newspapers and TV news. For instance, a post on a Twitter or Instagram with an emergency news can be easily be shared to every subscriber with it's up-to-date information almost instantaneously.
Despite the fact that the internet on cellphones and computers is the easier way to be in touch with the world, it has some drawbacks. Firstly, many younglings who spends too much time on technological gadgets have health issues like eye sight related problems. Secondly, people at young age will become less active because they utilize their time on electronical devices. That is why it is crucial to encourage children to start reading the newspapers and should watch news on television. Additionally, people appreciate to read books because they contain the unique information which generally is not available on online internet articles. Lastly, newspapers companies could reconsider in changing their formats and information to attract new audience of modern world pupils who in turn will help themselves by spending time on productive things rather than wasting time on internet social media platforms.
In conclusion, although internet is the most convenient way of gathering new information on a daily basis, people should find a balancing way of using newspapers, TV news, using mobile devices to maintain eyes health on the high level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a detailed manner" with adverb for "detailed"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...cuss the prime causes and its solutions in a detailed manner. Apparently, modernization and weste...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...logical gadgets have health issues like eye sight related problems. Secondly, people at y...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'appreciate reading'.
Suggestion: appreciate reading
...ews on television. Additionally, people appreciate to read books because they contain the unique i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1826.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35483870968 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95526686142 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5715137436 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.733333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7333333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150709666678 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522813851279 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399577283059 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983961418709 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351953799517 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.05 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.