Letter of enquiry
Dear Mr. Hammond,
I am writing to enquire about the French lesson you organise for individuals at your tutorial centre.
I got to know about your French class while chatting with a friend, Monica. She actually attended your last Summer French class and she spoke highly of your expertise. She gave me a good recommendation of you.
I actually want to learn French language for immigration purposes. Learning the language will give me an edge over other immigrants because I can actually live in the French speaking states in Canada. There are so many job opportunities there , due to less competition as many immigrants have little or no knowledge of French language.
I would like us to arrange a meeting before I start the class so we discuss all the modalities. I live very close to you , my house is just about 10 minutes walk to the language centre . I am usually free on Mondays, Tuesdays and Fridays. My contact phone number is 08012223434
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Ife Bajo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Hammond, I am writing to enquire ...
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Suggestion: ,
...here are so many job opportunities there , due to less competition as many immigra...
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...the modalities. I live very close to you , my house is just about 10 minutes walk ...
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...t 10 minutes walk to the language centre . I am usually free on Mondays, Tuesdays ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...0 minutes walk to the language centre . I am usually free on Mondays, Tuesdays an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71494249728 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691428571429 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2511486853 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.216113520407 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0766984524023 0% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.12726935374 0% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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