Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Living abroad without speaking the local language fluently exerts manifold adverse impacts on foreigners, not only social problems but also practical problems. While I suppose that there are several benefits of living in another country, it is my contention that its drawbacks pose obstacles to foreigners’ lives.
It stands to reason that migrating to a country where speaking a foreign language would be conducive to individuals’ development. Firstly, foreigners have an excellent opportunity to sharpen their language skills and gain deeper insight into local cultures. An explanation is that it creates a good condition for them to interact with native residents on the daily basis. Secondly, people might have a tendency to settle down in another country for a lucrative income. Thanks to it, they easily ease their financial burdens and put money aside for a rainy day in the future.
On the other hand, people certainly have to face an array of downsides when they live abroad without fluency in a foreign language. First, individuals with poor language skill might encounter language barriers, even culture shock when they make an effort to integrate with the local community. As a result, there are a multitude of conflicts and misunderstandings between them and others, and it renders them isolated and depressed. Furthermore, it is an uphill task for some foreigners to make ends meet because they will have difficulties in landing a steady job. It is likely that employers tend to recruit those who live in the same motherland in order to easily get on well with other colleagues, so the work production will be increased.
In conclusion, although I believe that the upsides of living in another country are obvious, I still subscribe to the opinion that foreigners who have a paucity of language skill have to encounter serious adversities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, i suppose, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.03092783505 396% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 26.3917525773 159% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 937.175257732 167% => OK
No of words: 300.0 206.0 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20333333333 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89189480368 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 127.690721649 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 491.4 290.88556701 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.1037584061 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 4.34317383033 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227150141109 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749128065985 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559378621289 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141899807669 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240424222625 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 8.37731958763 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 70.7449484536 68% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 41.2886597938 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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