Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news. However, others believe that they can learn news better through other media. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is a controversial issue over whether newspapers or other media assist individuals to get news better. While people have a chance to derive manifold information from newspapers, I describe the opinion that other media play an integral part in life.
It stands to reason that the benefits of getting news through newspapers are obvious. Firstly, newspapers are a source of information which is likely to be official and reliable. The reason is that the checking process with various steps before being published is extremely rigorous and professional, in order to minimize the risk of faulty news which would possibly ruin the reputation of the publishers. Secondly, a huge number of people, especially old readers, are used to reading traditional newspapers so as to keep updated with information. Because not only is it a source of news, but it also creates a good condition for them to enjoy peaceful moments and melt away all the tension when they are with a cup of tea at weekends.
On the other hand, there are multiple other means of media emerging in modern life, especially online social media. First, individuals are able to get access to different sources of information in the blink of an eye through social networks such as Facebook or Twitter. Thanks to cutting-edge technology, people have excellent opportunities to catch up with up-to-the-minute news all around the world via the internet. Furthermore, those means of media allow individuals to receive news in the diversity of illustrations. An explanation is that the press could attach videos, images and even documents in order to assist people to have a better understanding of the news.
In conclusion, although getting news from newspapers is of importance, it is my contention that people should read news through other media because of an array of its upsides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 508, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... used to reading traditional newspapers so as to keep updated with information. Because ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10927152318 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98769747431 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0190364707 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275326119911 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101858188481 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699823712386 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189555759555 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515353236661 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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