Many children are encouraged by their parents to get a part time job in their free time. What are the advantages and disadvantages to children of doing so.
Nowadays, Its commonly seen that parents motivate their children to do part-time jobs in their free time. Although many may see it as a positive phenomenon, but this is not a trend without drawbacks. Both merits and demerits will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs before a reasonable conclusion can be drawn.
The first positive aspect of doing part time jobs for young children is it gives them the golden opportunity to learn vocational skills that are not taught in schools. Also, earning money will develop a sense of accountability that in turn develops financial management skills. In addition to this, they get exposed to the people of different behaviours and attitudes that inculcate social skills. Moreover, it generates the ability to work efficiently under their supervisors even if they pressurize them.
On the contrary, many people vehemently contend that these temporary part-time jobs can deviate the young minds from studies and they lean more towards money. Besides this, the hectic schedule of work and studies makes them stressful and they get haywired while trying to make the balance between education and job. Also, the influence of bad people can let them indulge in various anti-social activities that can spoil their lives.
After analyzing both the views it is crystal clear that part-time jobs for children leaves a more negative impact on them which overshadows the advantages of it. Further, I strongly suggest that parents should only let their children do part-time work if its really needed to support them financially and keep a check on their working schedule and activities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 116, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
...-time jobs in their free time. Although many may see it as a positive phenomenon, but th...
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Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
.... The first positive aspect of doing part time jobs for young children is it gives the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, really, so, while, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 937.175257732 146% => OK
No of words: 261.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24521072797 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6850229183 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.9672766355 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.083333333 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377574041894 0.216113520407 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131871105334 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.15275554743 0.0603063233224 253% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240233151683 0.12726935374 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951167065231 0.0580467560999 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 8.37731958763 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 8.71597938144 151% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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