The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012

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The maps below illustrate how Frenton changed from 1990 to 2012

The maps illustrate a number of changes which took place in Frenton over the period of twenty-two years starting from 1990.
Overall, Frenton witnessed radical changes with the most noticeable being facilities and buildings.
On the left-hand side of High Street, it can be seen that library and school remain unchanged after twenty-two years. Although the hospital was still kept , it saw a dramatic expansion.In 1990, hospital was directly opposite playing fields with trees; but this place was replaced by blocks of flats in 2012. A number of trees were chopped down to construct a technopark while the bank was demolished to make the way for a restaurant.
On the other side of High Street, Frenton experienced the disappearance of flats to create a larger space. Moreover, the cafe and park was demolished to make a way for a new hotel and golf course. The cinema and supermarket were built and replaced the theatre and shops, respectively.Besides, on the east side of Frenton there used to be a house there, but it was replaced by blocks of flats in 2012.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, moreover, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 32.9175257732 15% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89691431922 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.0960356046 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 76.5299724578 145% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192109669134 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810514936361 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106132402755 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143300643538 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117569967673 0.0580467560999 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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