The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the two maps depicting the planned renovations of Islip town.
Perceptibly, the area is predicted to be upgraded significantly to become a more convenient living place with various features.
Regarding the current map, Islip is surrounded by a main road, which spans from the west to the east. Residents can find shops on two sides of the top main road, moreover, they can access countryside area nearby the northern stores. Simultaneously, the main road led to a park in the east and a school in the southwest, which are built around a large site devoted to housing.
Noticeably, the area, to home more amenities such as a bus station, a shopping center and a car park, is planned to extend toward the north, which was countryside previously. Meanwhile, the middle part of the main road is expected to be used for pedestrians only, so people could easily go for categories in the heart of the area. Albeit not projecting to witness renovations in the southern area, the park is predicted to be moderated, while housing would be newly-erected to the left. Additionally, a dual carriageway is estimated to stretch around the city; a part of it would lead to new housing on the right side of the car park.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the two maps depicting the planned reno...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76777251185 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89194297262 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.5074796963 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.777777778 76.5299724578 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.77777777778 4.34317383033 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0961716044391 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478278195373 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570483237214 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739804759752 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663206321502 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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