The given maps below illustrate changes that take place in an industrial area in the town of Norbiton.
Overall, the area will see a number of noteworthy modifications, the most important of which are the expansion of road, the addition of amenities and the substitution of factories by housings.
In the west of the map, a road will be deviated from the roundabout, and factories located around that will be turned to housings. The construction of a bridge will provide access to the housings in the farmland in the extreme north side of the center, which is now seperated from the area by a river. In the south, a smaller roundabout will be errected just behind the center one, and shops will be added instead of factories.
The east will also experience a lot of dramatic alternations, with factories along the innitial road being supplanted by loads of housings. Schools and Playground will be constructed to meet the needs of residents, and a medical center will be built near the two roundabouts.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 32.9175257732 6% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89952533368 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.7098670999 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.142857143 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.71428571429 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108648503413 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747049259601 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139833587774 0.0603063233224 232% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121149684934 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.170127059078 0.0580467560999 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.