Mrs. Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer
Dear Mrs Barret, I found out a advertisement concerning to offer help a home. I think it is relate as my job in the past. I writing this letter to take part be a applicant who can help your tasks as you go during next summer.
I have a lot experience about tasks home because I was educated independently since childhood. I can do anything for example swipe the floor, windows, and many stuff. Especially I can cook for someone who if you leave it as holiday. This job is suitable at my time, it is due to I have a lot of free time and I think it is the best time to use it.
At morning I would clean from bottom to top, after that I ensure it that the electric is off. At evening I will cook for my self and your child if you leave it. I can adjust to taste what she or he want to eat. Sometimes I will accompany them to play something. Before night coming up, I would check all doors and windows and I make a dinner.
Wish you all the best, Speak soon, tsabat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
Dear Mrs Barret, I found out a advertisement concerning to offer help ...
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Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'related'.
Suggestion: related
...ing to offer help a home. I think it is relate as my job in the past. I writing this l...
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Line 1, column 123, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...ink it is relate as my job in the past. I writing this letter to take part be a a...
^
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
.... I writing this letter to take part be a applicant who can help your tasks as yo...
^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ur tasks as you go during next summer. I have a lot experience about tasks home ...
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Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...educated independently since childhood. I can do anything for example swipe the f...
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Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun stuff seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much stuff', 'a good deal of stuff'.
Suggestion: much stuff; a good deal of stuff
...r example swipe the floor, windows, and many stuff. Especially I can cook for someone who ...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: IF_IS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
.... Especially I can cook for someone who if you leave it as holiday. This job is su...
^^
Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... use it. At morning I would clean from bottom to top, after that I ensure it th...
^^
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... At evening I will cook for my self and your child if you leave it. I can adjust...
^^
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your child if you leave it. I can adjust to taste what she or he want to eat. Som...
^^
Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
.... I can adjust to taste what she or he want to eat. Sometimes I will accompany them...
^^^^
Line 4, column 42, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ish you all the best, Speak soon, tsabat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.98453608247 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32908137355 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.5559134324 44.8134815571 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4615384615 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9230769231 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169742092606 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535770675906 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063970583341 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945282644593 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0656824743892 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.21 8.71597938144 60% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.