A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary unpaid work at the museum.
Dear Sir/Madam
My name Muhammad Abdurrohman
Iam Student at Amsterdam University
I am writing this letter to inform about my interesting to be a volunteer in your museum
Actually, yesterday I saw announcement about your museum which is looked for part time unpaid worker and I interest about that job because nowadays I don’t have task from my lecture and I have free time until next month then I want increased my skill and knowledge about ancient thing in your museum. Before I apply this job I have worked in hospitality sector in the company near from my college which is I believed can helped your employee for maintenance and served every visitor who came for studied or spend their leisure time, hopefully you can considered my knowlede and my skill for this occasion because I need this job for fill my time before I started my major. If you decided to approved my offering I ready to worked as soon as possible after you accepted my application
Thank you for giving the matter yout attention and I hope to hear your reply soon
Your faithfully
Muhammad abdurrohman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sting to be a volunteer in your museum Actually, yesterday I saw announcement a...
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Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...t about your museum which is looked for part time unpaid worker and I interest about that...
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Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'tasked'.
Suggestion: tasked
... that job because nowadays I don’t have task from my lecture and I have free time un...
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Line 6, column 553, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'consider'
Suggestion: consider
...d their leisure time, hopefully you can considered my knowlede and my skill for this occas...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hear your reply soon Your faithfully Muhammad abdurrohman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, if, look, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8085106383 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60777210051 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61170212766 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 12.6804123711 24% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 16.3608247423 379% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.677703589 44.8134815571 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 301.333333333 76.5299724578 394% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.6666666667 16.8248392259 372% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 4.34317383033 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202356194204 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136742658253 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266101105901 0.0603063233224 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799154214419 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637368617338 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 8.37731958763 389% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 17.01 70.7449484536 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 3.82989690722 339% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 26.3 7.45979381443 353% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 7.59969072165 138% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 8.54432989691 314% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 8.15463917526 331% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.