Dear Sir,
My name is Amy and I am writing this letter to formally apply for the unpaid work at the museum. I discovered about this position in print media advert and I believe I would make a strong candidate.
Since I have been looking to gain some real-life experience in paleontology, I believe this position would provide me with great insight of workflow at the museum. Moreover, I am also preparing to apply for graduate school next year and this experience will not only boost my application at university but also will act as a steppingstone towards my future goals.
To prove my candidacy, I would like to add that, I have earned a bachelor’s degree in Paleontology from Duke University which is one of the best educational institute in north east. Apart from that, I also have indulged in internship experience at Mat Museum which provided me with exceptional experience. I have no doubt that my educational qualifications and apprentice period will come in handy at during my time at the museum.
Finally, I am available anytime from 4pm-8pm during weekday and as you require on weekends. Please do not hesitate to reach out via email should you have any more questions. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Amy Adams
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1051.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88837209302 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88321826077 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613953488372 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6326737598 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5454545455 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5454545455 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217031470398 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0777416583446 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722617027422 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13046990013 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496762462208 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.