Many employed people suffer from health-related issues because they can’t find enough time to do adequate workout. Even though there are superior facilities available to make life easier, competitive work environment and busy lifestyle are two of the main culprits for such notion. This essay will discuss why this is a widespread problem and suggest appropriate solutions.
At the outset of this millennium, people are under immense pressure at their workplace to get done. Heavy competition among colleagues and ambition to outdone other people has taken toll on people’s health. They have to work long hours to keep their employee happy. In addition, due to nuclear family on rise, working class people do not get help with other chores such as cooking and cleaning, Even though after long workday, they have to take care of needs of their kids and other routine. For example, my friend, Karen, works from 9am to 7pm and after that she needs to provide dinner for her family and tuck her kids in the bed. She gets little to no time for a workout.
On the other hand, I believe, technology and innovation has brought added value to lifestyle. people can switch to many alternatives which allows them to include workout in their routine. To exemplify, instead of sitting entire day at your desk, you can use standing desk. Another instance is that instead of taking elevator, use stairs. Moreover, people can do meal prep to ease the load of cooking on weekdays and also hire handyman to assist with cleaning. Working people can incorporate such options to their busy workweek to get essential amount of exercise to keep healthy.
To recapitulate, most of the people complain of not getting enough time during their busy work week to workout and even if they do, they tend to relax because of their fast-paced lifestyle. Even though increasing work pressure and fast paced lifestyle does not allow to get exercise, tweaking little changes in routine and planning ahead will help in getting time to exercise on regular basis
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- In the future more people will choose to go on a holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday Do you agree or disagree 78
- Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have problems as a result Why do many working people not get enough exercise What can be done about this problem 84
- In some area of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion on this 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
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Line 7, column 268, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, for example, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98240469208 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49857846944 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574780058651 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9343513662 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9411764706 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0588235294 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.416862383653 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119376372722 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738404301331 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241162264255 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257717560077 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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