An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport,but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.Write to your friend. In your letter Explain the situation Offer to make alte

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An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport,
but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
 Explain the situation
 Offer to make alternate arrangements

Dear Jade,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to sadly inform you that I am unable to meet you at the airport as planned. Let me explain the situation.

To elucidate, unfortunately, an urgent meeting has come up in my office which involves presenting our product portfolio to customers visiting from Japan. Although I tried to skip this meeting however it seems impossible as I am the only one who has detailed technical knowledge on the products so my presence is mandatory. Additionally, after this event, I have to attend an unexpected conference call from a customer in South Africa. I hope you will understand the situation and will not be angry with me.

Furthermore, I have arranged a taxi for you which will arrive at the airport by 5 pm. The driver has your contact details, therefore, he will call you when you reach the arrival gates. The taxi will drive you back to my home where you can relax. Later in the evening, I plan to take you to the city centre for a nice dinner and shopping.
I wish you a safe journey and hope to see you soon.
Warm wishes
Said

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jade, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to...
^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and hope to see you soon. Warm wishes Said
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, therefore, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51776649746 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61019354857 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649746192893 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1038377456 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4615384615 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1538461538 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259506737586 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839203348321 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546822062927 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145595788372 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413615949131 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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