ou have a problem with a neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbor. in your letter
. Describe the problem
. say how long it has been a problem.
. Explain what action you want the neighbors to take
Dear Bruce,
I wanted to you let you know about an issue that we have been facing for few days now.
The problem is we are really annoyed by the noise and the loud music which come from your house. I understand that you have guests in your home and it will take some time to settle everything but the incessant loud music disturbs my mom’s day naps which had been her routine for years.
This trouble has started on last Sunday and it never stopped. I got to know from my wife that you had several parties in your dweller last week which could be the trigger for this all-time party mood.
Let me tell you what is my suggestion on this. Please be considerate about people who live around you. I want you to inform your guests and other family members about our difficulties living through high metal music and ensure they don’t make noise all time or play loud music.
I hope you will understand my problem and take the necessary actions.
Best wishes,
Arun
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...necessary actions. Best wishes, Arun
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52808988764 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.11850647584 2.54303337028 83% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0494323313 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183743107017 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723294680245 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526670718807 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112870353622 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450446675634 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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