It is generally accepted that exercise is good for children and teenagers. Therefore, physical education and sport should be compulsory for all students in all schools. What do you think?
Doing exercise is effective and makes children and teenagers active and fit. Though it is known to all, in all schools making physical education and sport compulsory for all is reverent. I believe while children are happy of doing exercise, making it compulsory for all will be more joyful to them.
Even though many accept that regular activities are ideal, there are some troubles to be avoided. While doing exercise, children must have to be administrated by someone. Because of doing it regularly, blood circulates well in the body and they can be healthy. For example, in this competitive world, most of the children and young are not spending much time for maintaining their body. If regular exercise is taken by all, they can be brisk. Exercise helps to grow our strength and to protect us from danger practicing it regularly can be a solution, especially for ladies.
However, physical education such as sports has to be made compulsory in all teaching schools. If it is mandatory, students will be able to stress-free from their studies and may spend their free time usefully. Through playing sports, they can empower their brain and boost their knowledge. As concentration power increases, they can easily study their subject well in a short time than before. Hence, most of the unwanted activities can be avoided, such as playing mobile games, gossip-talk and so on. For example, people are welcoming sports nowadays because it will help students to get a good career in the future after schooling.
In a nutshell, both exercises for young and making physical education mandatory for all in school are intellectual. In my opinion, those are the best activity to destress from all their work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tivity to destress from all their work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, may, so, well, while, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03521126761 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68140680833 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552816901408 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.5160678673 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.1176470588 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7058823529 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.94117647059 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392966307809 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133752066614 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110187156291 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26512614977 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859425445043 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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