People in your area are having problems with their internet connection Write a letter to the company which provides the connection In your letter describe the problems explain how they are affecting people say what the company should do to help

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People in your area are having problems with their internet connection. Write a letter to the company which provides the connection.

In your letter

describe the problems

explain how they are affecting people

say what the company should do to help

Dear Sir o Madam

I am writing this letter to report several problems with the internet connection in our community this month. My name es Maria Guerrero and I live in Macul, in the well-known condominium called Estrella, and my customer number is AFC578.

I am very disappointed with the service that your company has been delivering this month. It is almost impossible to get a decent internet connection; it is deficient, and some days We do not have any.

The fact that we do not get a good internet connection is a serious problem because the quarantine, the home office has increased, and the importance of having fast internet. Also, the kids are at home all day and want to see series and games online for fun.

Please, We ask for an online meeting to talk about solutions for this inconvenience, and you see the problems We have with the connection. I hope to hear you back very soon.

Yours faithfully
Mrs. Maria Guerrero

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75151515152 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72246040074 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2180632199 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.55555555556 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213401364354 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734168718201 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701507282063 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116228566119 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0346310242081 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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