A Piece of equipment you use at home for your work is causing problems write a letter to company/shop. Describe the problem explain how it’s affecting your work and what would you like the company to do.
Dear Sir,
My name is Gitesh Shah and resident of Chandigarh, India. I am one of your regular consumers from the last ten years. I am writing this to complain about the printer that I bought from your shop one week ago.
I was earlier working as a full time employee in IT Park but due to an accident, the company asked me to work from home. The firm I am working with is a press and I need to print lots of paper on daily bases hence, to simplify my work I decided to buy a high-quality printer.
I visited your shop last Friday and purchased an HP printer. I was working well till yesterday but at the moment it is dysfunctional. I tried to figure out the reason for its problem but all was in vain. I am able to cope up with the work and need to send around a hundred prints daily to my office but I am not able to do it.
As you can see, I need this printer as my whole work is dependent on it hence, I need to fix it. I would like to request your company that either replace this equipment or fix it in 1 or 2 days as early as possible.
Yours Faithfully,
Gitesh Shah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... bought from your shop one week ago. I was earlier working as a full time empl...
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Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...week ago. I was earlier working as a full time employee in IT Park but due to an accid...
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Line 8, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... but at the moment it is dysfunctional. I tried to figure out the reason for its ...
^
Line 8, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...on for its problem but all was in vain. I am able to cope up with the work and ne...
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Line 10, column 37, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... As you can see, I need this printer as my whole work is dependent on it hence,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.04147465438 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33355428237 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.457269597 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0833333333 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268111414805 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907883469002 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461593867739 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147419038465 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374232642338 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.86 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.57 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.