On a recent holiday you lost a valuabel item Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of the lost item Write a letter to the insurance manager In your letter describe the item you lost explain how you lost it tell the insurance company what

Respected sir ,
I am MrS. urja Manan shah. I am basically form Surat.I am writing you this letter to inform you.I lost my cellphone during my holidays in the Goa.

My mobile phone is iPhone XR. Which price is 60000.
I had covered insurance since I have coverage policy form your company policy no: 6347.furthermore ,I am hoping to get my insurance money back.

Although the insistent occurred when I was spand a leisure time spand in Goa between 20 th faburary to 10 th march2021.I was on Bhaga beach on 3rd March when I lost mobile phone In the sand. I search for thr item for more the quarter of hour and it was nowhere .I immediately lodged FIR in the registration no is Ga 2532173.

Moreover ,since I hold insurance coverage for the mobile phone.I would like to claim the insurance amount for the insurance.I am liable to claim an amount of 62000/-as an insurance refund for the lost item.please find the invoice and the FIR copy for the lost mobile phone with this letter.

I hope reward soon.

Yours faithfully,
Urja ManAn shah

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Respected sir , I am MrS. urja Manan shah. I am basi...
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected sir , I am MrS. urja Manan shah. I am basicall...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Urja
Respected sir , I am MrS. urja Manan shah. I am basically form Surat.I...
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Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'formed'.
Suggestion: formed
...am MrS. urja Manan shah. I am basically form Surat.I am writing you this letter to i...
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Line 2, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...a Manan shah. I am basically form Surat.I am writing you this letter to inform yo...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...m writing you this letter to inform you.I lost my cellphone during my holidays in...
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Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...m writing you this letter to inform you.I lost my cellphone during my holidays in...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lphone during my holidays in the Goa. My mobile phone is iPhone XR. Which pri...
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Line 4, column 32, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
.... My mobile phone is iPhone XR. Which price is 60000. I had covered insuran...
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Line 5, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...60000. I had covered insurance since I have coverage policy form your company ...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
...insurance since I have coverage policy form your company policy no: 6347.furthermo...
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Line 5, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have coverage policy form your company policy no: 6347.furthermore ,I am hoping...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...our company policy no: 6347.furthermore ,I am hoping to get my insurance money ba...
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Line 5, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hoping to get my insurance money back. Although the insistent occurred when I w...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ng to get my insurance money back. Although the insistent occurred when I was span...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...though the insistent occurred when I was spand a leisure time spand in Goa betwee...
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Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...tween 20 th faburary to 10 th march2021.I was on Bhaga beach on 3rd March when I ...
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Line 7, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or thr item for more the quarter of hour and it was nowhere .I immediately lodge...
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Line 7, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for more the quarter of hour and it was nowhere .I immediately lodged FIR in the...
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Line 7, column 264, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...the quarter of hour and it was nowhere .I immediately lodged FIR in the registra...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e quarter of hour and it was nowhere .I immediately lodged FIR in the registrat...
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Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e quarter of hour and it was nowhere .I immediately lodged FIR in the registrat...
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Line 7, column 311, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ediately lodged FIR in the registration no is Ga 2532173. Moreover ,since I ho...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...istration no is Ga 2532173. Moreover ,since I hold insurance coverage for the ...
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Line 9, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...insurance coverage for the mobile phone.I would like to claim the insurance amoun...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... the insurance amount for the insurance.I am liable to claim an amount of 62000/-...
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Line 11, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lost mobile phone with this letter. I hope reward soon. Yours faithfully, ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 868.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59858935725 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629032258065 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 86.3115632486 44.8134815571 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.9090909091 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 27.0 2.54639175258 1060% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262275871589 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635460404896 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853814324006 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100476661055 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085460568376 0.0580467560999 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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