You have a meeting with your manager the next day Write a letter telling him her what you are going to discuss in the meeting In your letter you should tell what you have done for the company in the year you worked there what changes you would like to rec

Respected sir,
I am writing this letter for informing you to discuss the agenda for the next day.
I am a working here as a hr administrator past 2 years. My job responsibility is to trained the junior hr and handle them queries regarding job , maintain attendance sheet,payroll and recruitment . I am maintaining daily attendance sheet. And giving the training for the junior employee how to recruit the employees.

In last days my promotion had done and I am a work there as a hr manager . I am handling the hr department. And I would to discuss the most important factor is retention . How to overcome the retention however the higher ration see in the in in skilled employees as well as semi skilled employees . Because retention is one of the biggest issue of the company.

This issue is removing we have make a strong strata egg for employes engagement activities. Organisation offers them pension plan , over time compensation etc. while female women’s working in the company they gave extension of maturnity leave we have arrange the celebration for every festival.and make a company’s environment very peaceful.and celebrate employees birthday in the organisation.

The employees provide powerful training. Form there duty. Generally training is required for in in skilled employees or semi skilled employees.

Thanking you,

Yours faithfully
Urja Manan shah

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, regarding, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1171.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29864253394 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12861562848 2.54303337028 123% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610859728507 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7714193639 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8823529412 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0 16.8248392259 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 2.54639175258 1257% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158871737091 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04556012261 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753971382444 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884544222163 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107467609766 0.0580467560999 185% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.57 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.