on a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
write a letter to the manager of you insurance company in your letter describe:
the item you lost
explain how you lost it
tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
My name is Ahmed Shehata, holder of a ravel insurance certificate number "17655". I am writing to you this letter to make a claim with the price of something I lost in my last vacation.
Last week, I was spending my holiday in "Sharm beach Resort" in Sharm ElSheikh city, Egypt. Unfortunately, when I returned home, to my shock, I discovered that I have forgotten my camera's Macro Lens in my hotel room. It was a very expensive lens, so I immediately called the hotel to ask about it, however I could not get it back.
I figured out that I forgot to put it back in my bag after the last time I used it, and sadly I did not check my room properly before leaving for any forgotten item. As the bus tha would take me to the airport was already waiting and I had to go down quickly.
I am asking the company to repay me with the price of a used Macro Lens of the same make, which is approximately 100 USD.
Thanks in advance,
Sincerely,
Ahmed Shehata
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48369565217 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77580158385 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.2933228814 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6666666667 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865953384226 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347010695948 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630526329718 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561848967601 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671735144091 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.