On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. You have travel insurance to cover the cost anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of the insurance company. In the letter you should:
• describe the item that you lost
• explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir/Madam
I would like to make a claim for losing my cellphone and get it refunded by insurance company.
Me and my partner was travelling in Bali for a vacation and I lost my iphone 7. It is not a new model but is really important to me because it have all my travel pictures there and I use it for communications.
Stayed in Ubud but we wanted to see waterfalls so we took a bus to travel in the jungle. After we started to travel back I notice that my phone wasn’t in my pocket anymore. We were looking around but did not find it anywhere. Then I realized that it might fall out of my pocket when we were crossing a river as it was the most difficult part in our path way back.
As I have insurance which is covered for cases like this I would like to make a claim. Unfortunately it can’t be replaced anymore and there is no need to replace it to a new one as it is old model then I think it would be the best to get it refunded for me.
Looking forward hearing back to you soon.
Kind regards
Jenna Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...ut is really important to me because it have all my travel pictures there and I use ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15763546798 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48336453628 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56157635468 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.22235513 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0973618019071 0.216113520407 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388639652028 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452340796546 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664161433393 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446151910134 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.