Recently you have attended a job interview which went well, but you are still waiting for the result. Write a letter to HR manager of the company.
In your letter, you should:
• give details of the job
• tell why you think the interview went well
• explain why you need to know the result.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing you for the interview which take place at Law Firm Karu Wednesday afternoon 2 pm.
I am applying for the attorney's position, who especialize criminal and corporation law which is my speciality. I graduated my masters degree four years ago and currently working as a attorney at Law Firm Rebane.
I think that the interview this Wednesday went well because Law Firm Karu can offer me challenges and cases which can make a difference for the court system. Athmosphere and colleagues were nice and overall work mode is very suitable for my aspects.
I would like to know if I am suitable for this position. Law Firm where I currently work also made me an offer but I rather join with Law Firm Karu instead. I also have to give 30 days notice before I can leave.
Looking forward from hearing you
Yours faithfully
Jane Austin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...corporation law which is my speciality. I graduated my masters degree four years ...
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Line 9, column 182, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...four years ago and currently working as a attorney at Law Firm Rebane. I thi...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as a attorney at Law Firm Rebane. I think that the interview this Wednesday...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 26.3917525773 30% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86092715232 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62711150069 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649006622517 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5759527879 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5555555556 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156320467407 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641752719904 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622446590292 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102561994394 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645406658596 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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