Recently you saw an article in a newspaper/journal about a city/town you know and some of the information in the article was incorrect. Write a letter to the editor regarding this.
In your letter, you should tell:
• how you know about this city/town
• what information was incorrect
• what the editor should do about this.
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that the information published in your newspaper about district 10, California city, is not correct.
I was born and raised in this district and I am familiar with the modern infrastructure of this city. My father also works in the city council and as a result, our family have in depth knowledge about the town.
It was published that district 10 have a water purification plant which recycles and provides clean water to the inhabitants. Unfortunately, this information is not true. I believe there could be a typo error because this plant is situated in the district 01 which is one of the pioneer towns of our city.
Kindly correct this information in your newspaper’s archive. In addition, I would request to publish a correction note on Monday’s paper so that the audience could be brought out of any confusion.
I look forward to your prompt action in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Megan Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in addition, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94545454545 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86586573474 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624242424242 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5677107677 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268230611369 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104797906115 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891005871015 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152383206166 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104802613836 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.