A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
• explain what you are currently doing
• describe your suitability for this area of work
• say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to the advertisement for waiters and waitresses you have uploaded in the local ‘The Daily English newspaper’
I am currently studying Hospitality course in SP College. Plus part time job in the KFC Café, where I work as a waiter. Unfortunately the café is going to close in next month and I need money to support my education. Therefore, I am looking for the same job you have mentioned in your advertisement.
During my job I have learnt various skills from table preparation to serving and currently I am at the post of skilled level 2. In addition to that, I have achieved ‘A’ grade certification from my current job for cleaning and housekeeping. Hence, my credentials are completely matching with your expectations.
I can be present for the interview from 5 pm to 10 pm all the weekdays. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Vishal Bhat.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter with regards to...
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Line 5, column 64, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Hospitality course in SP College. Plus part time job in the KFC Café, where I work as a ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat.
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Vishal Bhat.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00628930818 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18843733964 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.089381917 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267354639815 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0971696810496 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680594383437 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146541946474 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555549663785 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.