Some people believe the aim of University education istohelp graduate get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of University education for both individuals and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Thess days more and more people attend tertiary education. While it is argued by some individuals that the main purpose of attending University is to improve job prospects, others thinks that there are other broader benefits to the society and individuals. This essay will discuss both opinions extensively.
On the one hand,it is of no doubt that most companies would want to employ graduates.in other words, employers of this organization will prefer an employee who have gained knowledge in a particular field that will further improve the company productivity.As a result, graduate with tertiary degree are employed faster than those that did not University. For example, New Zealand,most University graduate get job offer immediately after graduation and this has led to 0.1percent drop in unemployment among graduate.Therefore having a university degree or experience helps to secure better job on the long run.
On the other hand, acquiring University certificate I both beneficial to the individuals as they become independent. This is the period they will the leave comfort of their home and family to stay in the hostel where they interact and socialize with friends from different background.Thus, they learn to confront challenging task by themselves thereby taking decisions. In addition,the society also benefit as most graduate would want to give back to the society by donating financially or support with their knowledge and experience in order to develop the community.
In Conclusion, although tertiary degree helps graduate to secure fantastic job,I agree that this can also be beneficial to both the individuals and society at large.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47470817121 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10322932585 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6452146766 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 76.5299724578 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 4.34317383033 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249434543586 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111045359269 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737149067478 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152101754972 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497798170583 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 8.37731958763 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 70.7449484536 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 8.71597938144 169% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...opinions extensively. On the one hand,it is of no doubt that most companies woul...
^^^
Line 3, column 256, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...urther improve the company productivity.As a result, graduate with tertiary degree...
^^
Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , most
...not University. For example, New Zealand,most University graduate get job offer immed...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ent drop in unemployment among graduate.Therefore having a university degree or experienc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 515, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ent drop in unemployment among graduate.Therefore having a university degree or experienc...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thus
... with friends from different background.Thus, they learn to confront challenging tas...
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Line 5, column 382, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...es thereby taking decisions. In addition,the society also benefit as most graduate w...
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Line 6, column 79, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...e helps graduate to secure fantastic job,I agree that this can also be beneficial ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 937.175257732 150% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47470817121 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10322932585 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 290.88556701 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6452146766 44.8134815571 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.333333333 76.5299724578 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.5555555556 16.8248392259 170% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 4.34317383033 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249434543586 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111045359269 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737149067478 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152101754972 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497798170583 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 8.37731958763 222% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 70.7449484536 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 8.71597938144 169% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.