Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think the family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
These days, childcare facilities are now popular. While it is argued by some career parents that daycare services is the best place for pre-school children, others believe that family relatives play a better role. These views will be further discussed in the essay and submit.
On the one hand, individuals who supported family members such as grandparents as caregiver cited that it helps to reduce cost. In other words, when children are looked after at home by their relatives, the money for daycare purpose is been diverted to meet other family needs, as most times, parents are faced with lot of responsibilities.so having their grandparents take care of their children reduces financial burden. In addition, most working parents feels the home is safer for their children as they are under the watchful eyes of their family relatives.there is no doubt that most parents wants to protect their little ones and this is the best approach.
On the other hand, supporters of this view emphasized the need for daycare facilities. Firstly, most childcare centres are located in school environment and this offer the opportunity for the child to learn some paintings and drawings which helps their cognitive development. For instance, studies done in the United States among young children who are brought into school at early age,it showed that they tend to out smart other children who are taking care of at home. Moreso, the child meet other children from different background which helps to develop their communication skills.
In Conclusion, although people have varying opinion about daycare, I believe that it is a better place for working parents to keep their pre-school children.
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- Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school Other working parents think the family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children Discuss both views an 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 386, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...who are brought into school at early age,it showed that they tend to out smart othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21611721612 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6841745035 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575091575092 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.5081917517 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.454545455 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9090909091 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440068829268 0.244688304435 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154572983723 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678178473476 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261573141657 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259665334301 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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