Dear Sir,
I'm writing this letter with regards to the job I agreed to take this summer. Due to some reasons, it wouldn't be possible for me to occupy that spot this year.
My school just called off their ongoing strike that has lasted for about 8 months; the students are required to start classes from next week Monday, since the first semester exams starts in three weeks. We'd be occupied throughout this year so as to cover everything we missed in the last academic session.
Please I'm really very sorry for the inconvenience this might have caused your office. I never saw this coming! I plead with you to accept my apology.
Lastly, I want to bring to your notice that I'm still interested to work in your establishment. If I am giving this same opportunity next summer, then I would gladly fill in that position to work as your sales manager.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Grant
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, really, so, still, then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73652694611 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41200696898 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706586826347 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.1824625842 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175936315873 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0668020931566 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479528645494 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912617231203 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048414083997 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.