The system used for rubbish garbage collection in your local area is not working properly This is causing problems for you and your neighbors Write a letter to the local council In your letter describe how the rubbish collection system is not working prop

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The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbors.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter

describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly
explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours
suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to bring to your attention the issues we are facing with the garbage disposal in our area.

Our neighborhood includes around 20 households and we share a common garbage disposal site. The compactor for the garbage collector has not been working for the last three days. As a result, trash has been piling up in it, leading to it overflowing out on to the adjacent areas.

Since it has been windy all this week, the garbage has been scattered around the entire locality. It is not only resulting in ticks and flies emanating from the trash, but it is also a concern for the kids playing outside and accidentally coming in contact with it and potentially catching a disease.

To begin with, I would request you to immediately have the compactor fixed. If it will take some time, I would request to increase the frequency of trash collection to at least twice a day so that it does not end up on the roads.

I look forward to a prompt response upon receipt of this letter.
Yours faithfully,
John Doe

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, at least, as a result, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63101604278 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54655528261 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641711229947 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2243442355 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175437549711 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646231940545 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532929004367 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0819868970115 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348900107105 0.0580467560999 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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