People are getting busier every day and spending most of their time in working and hardly getting some time for keep them self physically fit. Due to that many persons are dealing with health hazards. This essay will discuss the causes of not getting enough time for exercise including working for longer hours and low wages. This essay will also discuss the solution to these problems including restricting work hours for individuals and defining the minimum wages for different trades.
People are often seen to work for extended hours to cope up with the working pressure. In addition few physically demanding trades where wages are really low, employees works for the entire day to earn their daily expenditure. For instance, sales marketing teams works for long time to meet their target and on the other hand manual labours works for whole day to run his family. These work culture leave them with no time for exercise.
Keeping yourself involved in some physical activities is important to stay healthy. People has to realize the importance of exercise and have to balance there work life accordingly. Government should also take action for the employees exploits the labour market by not paying proper wages to the employees. For example, employees should work for a defined work hours and spend quality time with family. Moreover, government should come up with the minimum wages trade wise.
In conclusion, in present time more people are falling seek due to not spending time to keep them self fit. This essay discussed how over time working due to pressure and low wage can cause health problems. This essay also suggested the solution for the problem with proper work-life balance and defining the minimum wage for labours.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 27, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
People are getting busier everyday and spending most of their time in work...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he minimum wages for different trades. People are often seen to work for extend...
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Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...o cope up with the working pressure. In addition few physically demanding trades where w...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... leave them with no time for exercise. Keeping yourself involved in some physic...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... up with the minimum wages trade wise. In conclusion, in present time more peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, if, moreover, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08710801394 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32287398373 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522648083624 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5331546749 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295509905167 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11812531045 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0731948321678 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204729266763 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530683338518 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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