Maintaining things in a well managed way is good and healthy habit. Leaving things in an organized way may not be a concern for some people as they are not loosing it, while keeping them sorted will help you to maintain personal hygiene. This essay will discuss why it is important to have personal things organized, be it office or your own home.
Few people really not worried while leaving something after use. There are instances where people forgot to kept the items in place, faced difficult in finding them when required. For example, there are many scenarios where people are found to rush for the house or car key before leaving to office, causing delays to there office. This would not happen if the keys are kept in a defined place.
Moreover, having everything organized is also a important to maintain a healthy life. Dumping things in a inappropriate way may attract insects and fungus over the time. For instance, leaving wet towels in bed after use may cause bed bugs with flowing time or leaving food boxes in office desk may invite some insect. That is whey arranging goods after use is important to reduce the changes of such issues.
In conclusion, even though some people don't want to understand the importance of keeping things shorted and in correct place, but still is a behaviour that can help you keeping yourself fit. However, if someone keep the things in a well mannered way is always appreciated by others and leaves a good impression about you.
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- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.Why do many working people not get enough exercise?What can be done about this problem? 73
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- many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.Why do many working people not get enough exercise?What can be done about this problem? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 164, Rule ID: SUPPOSE_TO[1]
Message: Probably you should use a past participle here: 'supposed'.
Suggestion: supposed
...son. Generally, people who are lazy are suppose to be untidy. However, few people feel ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, however, if, so, while, apart from, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1467.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98979591837 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75271795732 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496598639456 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.501959529 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.2941176471 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.94117647059 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314816517094 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118786533436 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118323248999 0.0667982634062 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211934321069 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816240382944 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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