The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.
The table compares 6 different metros in the opening date, distance, and passengers per year in the 4 developed countries.
Overall, the underground system in London, the only one Britian city showed in the table, reports the eldest and the longest railways whereas the metro in Tokyo, Japan, witnesses the largest user per year in the six cities.
Close examination shows that London was the pioneer in metropolitan transportation system, and started operating in 1863. Paris, France, followed the UK's step after 37 years. most of metros provided in the table were constructed during 20 century, although Los Angeles, the USA, has built their own subway system until 2001.
London's underground has deployed 394 km route till now, and it is around 100 km further than France's. Moreover, it is twice of the route in Tokyo, which places at 3rd followed by Washington DC, the USA, and Los Angeles. The shortest railway is in the Kyoto, the other city in Japan.
Despite having history of ages and longest path, there are only 775 million passengers ride on london's underground in one year. Comparing with London's, Tokyo's metro owns 3 times of riders, around 2 billions, every year, while Paris's metro is the second most popular system, either accounting for slightly small than 1.2 billions. It is worth noting that Japan, combining Tokyo and Kyoto, is the highest usage rate on the metro systems in the four.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 32.9175257732 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02966101695 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49090200318 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648305084746 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 7.0 0.824742268041 849% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.5805116863 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.909090909 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4545454545 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158456726585 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547166465183 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497664840647 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883185535931 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540619066376 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 41.2886597938 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.