Task 1:- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to:
explain the reason why you decline the offer (i tried to convince wife to move, she didnt agree)
express your gratitude (in deep gratitude to receive offer, golden opportunity for me to try something new)
explain why you like your current job very much (establish connections to colleagues, stable income)
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform that I have to decline your offer to work for abc tech as a project manager.
The reason why I cannot take this position is that I cannot live away from family. I tried to convince my wife and children to move to Singapore with me, however, they would not agree. As a husband and a father, I cannot leave them behind to just focus on my career. Another reason is that I have quite a strong attachment to my current company which I have been working for for almost 10 years.
Honestly, this is a golden opportunity for any man to take a step further in his career. I even thought about how far I could improve when I got to work in this international environment. Thus, I would like to express my deep gratitude to receive your invitation to work for abc tech.
As for my current company, I can say that I am enjoying every moment I spend in the office. I have established strong relationships with my boss and coworkers. Everyone understands each other perfectly so the jobs always run smoothly and easily.
I hope that you understand my decision this time.
Kind regards
Truong
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-09-07 | Sarab.rathor4@gmail.com | 78 | view |
| 2019-07-02 | BIBHU KALITA | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-31 | drtruong92 | 73 | view |
| 2019-05-18 | Ell | 78 | view |
| 2018-12-24 | tejinder15 | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 372, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: for
...rrent company which I have been working for for almost 10 years. Honestly, this is a...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
honestly, however, if, so, thus, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 943.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53365384615 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61492059656 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3045566825 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5384615385 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160416189031 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519006206686 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502368471077 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974846542245 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525279615075 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.