Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to suggest you a group of old people in old age house at saket are in need of help.
Let me tell you more in detail, due to rise in the count of members at old age , they are becoming more homeless because of lack of proper bed space and less food supplies. Considering their current scenario many corporate NGO's have initiated to help these senior citizens.If our company can initate to help by providing food,cloth and shelter, it would be a great help. We can initate for this nobel cause under our company social responsibilities and NGO act.Association with such group not only will give us an opportunity to serve the society back but also set an example in front of the world.
By this way ,our company will contribute for society and these people will get assistance in their basic needs. Looking at our contribution, other people will raise their hand to help and realise their social responsibilities for society.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Your faithfully,
Arti Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...initiated to help these senior citizens.If our company can initate to help them by...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cloth
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , our
...responsibilities and NGO act. By this,our company will contribute for society and...
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Line 7, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 740.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96644295302 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77269223359 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.946422768 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.125 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246764938576 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0969212067666 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712779137778 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137741378434 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0896508858137 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 8.37731958763 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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