It is vital to have strict traffic rules to limit the vehicle from having high speed on highways or other roads. In order to control and supervise effectively, it become necessary to impose and implement tough punishment for traffic offence. In the below paragraphs I shall put forth my valid argument to support my views.
Firstly, with a rise in population it has been observed by the researchers that the number of count of vehicles have been increased compared to past. People prefer to drive their vehicle on daily basis without bothering most of the time it’s speed limit, which might result into serious injuries or an accident, they rammed their vehicle into another and cause damage to other as well as to the public property.
Henceforth, it is required to have stringent punishments so that people choose to drive safely by adhering the traffic rules.
Secondly, form traffic rules are significant nowadays, enormous vehicle on highways and freeways usually people prefer to drive with high speed without minding the limit. In order to control them, traffic police took some harsh steps like imposing heavy fines on breaking traffic rules. People are now able to drive carefully, as they are afraid to pay heavy fine.
Although, these are other ways to control and deal with traffic offence by providing current awareness on traffic rules to general public. Making it compulsory for all the people to attend the sessions related to driving skills under certain weather conditions as well as basic driving skills to get driving licences. People requires to give an exams and pass as well on traffic rules to get license for vehicle.
To sum up, stricter traffic rules have bought significant benefits and results into fall in traffic offence and I strongly agree it is most needed and required step to control people from not following traffic offence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...limit the vehicle from having high speed on highways or other roads. In order to ...
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Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...o control and supervise effectively, it become necessary to impose and implement tough...
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Line 8, column 124, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...g current awareness on traffic rules to general public. Making it compulsory for all the peopl...
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Line 8, column 335, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'giving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: giving
...o get driving licences. People requires to give an exams and pass as well on traffic ru...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as to, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06774193548 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43162693959 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554838709677 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4206924228 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178394405582 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689795534245 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516155805912 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104778479117 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472039241991 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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