Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention and show my disillusionment on the poor condition and services at your sports center. I have already informed and complained about the same , but things remained same.
Let me tell you more in detail, changing room seems untidy and smell unpleasant because of no proper ventilation, it become difficult to stand there while changing and get fresh an up there. No dustbin has been placed inside the changing room, people throw waste anywhere on the floor. Moreover, most of the equipments and accessories at the sports center seems old and broken. The net of badminton, rim of basket ball is toned and some indoor games like chess, carom board and kiddo their partial parts are missing. Its become difficult to play .
I would like to suggest you, to look after these parameter and place exhaust fans in the changing room so that cross ventilation can take place as well bin get placed. Replace the old accessories and put missing sports games item. So that people will continue to come at your centre.
Looking forward to receiving your response.
Your sincerely,
Arti Singh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...y informed and complained about the same , but things remained same. Let me tel...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...nt because of no proper ventilation, it become difficult to stand there while changing...
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Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ome indoor games like chess, carom board and kiddo their partial parts are missin...
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Line 5, column 522, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ddo their partial parts are missing. Its become difficult to play . I would li...
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Line 5, column 548, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e missing. Its become difficult to play . I would like to suggest you, to look...
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Line 7, column 44, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this parameter' or 'these parameters'?
Suggestion: this parameter; these parameters
...ould like to suggest you, to look after these parameter and place exhaust fans in the changing ...
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Line 7, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ries and put missing sports games item. So that people will continue to come at your ce...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96373056995 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47986765569 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.720207253886 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6547322976 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140736271773 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0365500687175 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449674670075 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0692025869507 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444639874698 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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