Advancement in technology and easy access to Internet service as well as to TV help slot to ordinary people in getting fame. As it provide platform to show their extraordinary skills and talents at no cost.Now, the question arises whether it is positive or negative development. In the below paragraphs I will discuss in detail.
First, earlier people were not able to show their exclusive qualities and skills because of limited limited resources. They feel shy to come out and in present skills to outside world.Their hesitation was main reason to stop them from getting famous earlier. But since the momment TV and internet catches the eye of people, general audience get the motivation to come out and show their talent. Many TV serials like "The India got Talent" provides platform to ordinary people to show the world, what exclusive talent they have got and accordingly they are able to enjoy their fame by getting more work opportunities and good money.
Secondly, because of t.v and internet people are able able to come out of their shell, by watching other doing it online or on TV, they able to gain coinfidence on their capabilities with positive attitude, if other can showcase their qualities, I can do as well.
Lastly, people who are poor and belong to middle class and are not able to learn and studying their passion, because of TV and internet are able to do. Sometime, it has been observed due to its easy accessibility and wide usage people are using the same platform to become popular and famous. For example , on YouTube people are uploading their tips and qualities in which they are good at like teaching, cooking, dance moves, magic and many more. Their viewer increase and make them popular and people are able to recognise them and become.
To sum up, it is a positive development for ordinary people as it gives additional identity to introduce themselves in front of the world and more employment opportunities and they are able to taste their success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92920353982 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63680858531 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533923303835 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6237452021 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.538461538 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0769230769 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217916478187 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800701398689 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0482881385016 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133505291066 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332695274517 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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