There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports centre that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success.
Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. In your letter:
• Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is
• Say what happened the last times you complained
• Explain what you want the manager to do
Dear Sir,
This is regarding the changing room of the Nike sport center, in where the lock of the door is not properly working since last week.
As I have already complained last week regarding the same, once technician has visited the center on 27th Feb’18 i.e. the day before yesterday. Unfortunately, the technician had left the center, fixing nothing. He said he got an urgent call from his family, so he had to leave. We could not have help and allow him to leave, apparently, he was having some genuine issue.
However, I have been trying to contact another technician from the same organization. But they are not willing to come, moreover they are charging more than usual. As the owner of that organization, “Maa Kamahya”, is your family friend, I request you to kindly have a talk with the owner to reduce the price and send the technician at the earliest.
I hope you take the it as utmost priority and please do the needful. Looking forward to hearing from you. Thank you in anticipation.
Yours faithfully,
Simi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...an at the earliest. I hope you take the it as utmost priority and please do the ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87777777778 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72869977629 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.688888888889 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2468904511 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1666666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163288917508 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518894667501 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407773546244 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0930297609671 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313998959326 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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