Dear Sir / Madam,
I am Mani staying in an ATR apartment near the Salam public park from last 10 years with my family.I am writing this letter to inform you regarding the action taken by Local Council from 7th Phase of bgalii road,secndrabad, sector- 23.We got the information that they planning to sell the Salam park to the chemical factory.
The Salam Park is very spacious and at the center of our residential apartments.This park has facilities for all age people such as Gym , area for walking , playing.This park has good facilities of parking the vehicles, full of green.This park has good Skating ground as well.parents feel this park to be the safest place for the children to play in the evening. Hence, closing this park will disturb the daily routines of people.
Hence , all of us the members of all the Apartments near the park held an internal meeting and We all decided to not elect the Councillor for the upcoming election if the park will be on sale. We decided to go to media attention if the plan is not reversed. I would be more grateful if you would help to publish in the sakewe newspaper main edition.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
erer
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, regarding, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74285714286 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65050090273 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.739987475 44.8134815571 287% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.5 76.5299724578 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331398094681 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114052989371 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0752253360231 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171929288174 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659619101172 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 8.37731958763 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 8.62886597938 330% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.